martes, diciembre 15, 2009

PRINCESA EDELFINA


Dulce metáfora de alas
Eclipse de cuerpos que se encuentran
Ninguna N detendrá el impacto
Cuando tus ángulos busquen
Mis esquinas.

Pequeña flor de aladas primaveras
Tus sombras son mi reverencia
Y en tu santuario hecho
De verdades inocentes
Comulgaré las culpas compartidas.

14 comentarios:

Maik Pimienta dijo...

Vivan esas culpas querido Carlos, ya está bien de piadosos. Un fuerte abrazo.

fgiucich dijo...

Realmente, muy buen poema. Abrazos y buen 2010.

BETTINA PERRONI dijo...

Tremendo amigo... como siempre, las palabras las ajusta de tal manera que siempre llegan.

Vengo a desearle un feliz 2010. Deseo lo mejor del mundo para ti y los tuyos.

Y el 2009 lo despido muy triste por la triste noticia de la pèrdida de nuestra querida amiga Mar.

Robin dijo...

Siempre es un placer admirar un poema donde la metáfora tiene presencia, y esos ángulos tienen los grados exactos para encajar el poema con la pasión.

Un abrazo y buen año.

Isabel Romana dijo...

Un santuario hecho de verdades inocentes... ¡Qué maravilla! Un abrazo, querido amigo.

TORO SALVAJE dijo...

Hola Carlo.
Un placer saludarte otra vez.
Te felicito por el poema.

La puta que no te parió dijo...

WoW

Afiladísima esa pluma profe, cuanto dicho en tan pocas palabras.

Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeso

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